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Hi Ms. [이름],
Most people are always busy with work and with other things. People living in the city are usually not so friendly with their neighbors because like you said you don\'t have free time to talk with them. But personally, I wish people are more friendly like the old days. People nowadays are indifferent. Have a nice day! See you tomorrow!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I don\'t have neighbors in the past and in the present.
>>correct!
Because I am working mom so I can\'t make neighbors.
>>Because I am a working mom, I can\'t meet my neighbors.
Many mothers like friends\' mothers of my children\'s are not working mom.
>>Many mothers like the mothers of my children\'s friends are not working moms.
So they can often meet together and share student\'s information.
>>correct!
But I can\'t do it.
>>correct!
They give some information and take some inforamtion.
>>correct! (spelling:information)
If I don\'t have to give information, maybe they will hate me.
>>correct!
I want to have friendly neighbors despite I don\'t have some information.
>>I want to be friendly with my neighbors although I don\'t have information to share.
Nowadays many people are very selfish.
>>correct!
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