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2016-09-30 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

I have been working since 1995 in my office. I didn’t get the chance in a university but I always hope for the best and I tried for my promotion and my job. However, I am growing up and I will be an old woman soon it can’t avoid to everyone. So I should hope for the best but prepare the worst.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [이름]!

Wow! This composition is short but well written. Your composition today is very organize. It has an introduction and a very good conclusion. That\'s the way to do it, Ms. [이름]! Have an enjoyable weekend! See you on Tuesday!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

I have been working since 1995 in my office.

>> correct!
I didn’t get the chance in a university but I always hope for the best and I tried for my promotion and my job.

>> correct!
However, I am growing up and I will be an old woman soon it can’t avoid to everyone.

>> However, I am growing older and no one can avoid it.
So I should hope for the best but prepare the worst.

>> So I should hope for the best but prepare for the worst.

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