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Hello there Ms. [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework regularly. You had improve a lot. In fact, your compositions are getting longer. You commit less grammatical errors too.
Job well done, Ms. [이름]!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

I agree.

>> correct!
People are never satisfied with what they have like me.

>> correct!
I had a lot of loan from bank for a long time.

>> correct!

OR>> I got a loan from a bank and I had to pay that for  along time.

Because I bought my house and I had to help my families-in-law for a long time.

>> Because I bought my house and I had to help my family-in-law for a long time.
I case of my mother-in-law, she didn\'t know to save money and she always wasted money without her job.

>>In the case of my mother-in-law, she didn\'t know how to save money and she always spent money although she doesn\'t have a job.

So she always wanted a lot of money to her children who is my husband and my brother-in-law.

>> So she always ask a lot of money from her children who is my husband and my brother-in-law.
I always wanted to save money because I couldn\'t save money for a long time.

>> correct!
However, nowadays I can save money so I am happy but I still want something for example moving to a new house, having a new car, etc.

>> correct!
That is the reason why I agree.

>> correct!