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Hello, Ms. [이름]!
She\'s already ousted. The prosecution is seeking a warrant of arrest for her, right?
Take care!
~T. Lynn
It is very a big issue in my country.
>> It is a very big issue in my country.
Many korean people want the impeachment of the President and many korean also people dont want it.
>> Many Koreans want the president to be impeached but many people also support her.
In my opinion, she has to explain about a lot of issue that is good or bad.
>> In my opinion, she has a lot of explaining to do about many issues.
But she doesn\'t.
>> correct!
She should be responsible with a lot of problems.
>> She should be responsible about a lot of problems.
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