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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]!
You are correct! Time really flies so fast. Me too, I need more weekends! ^^ Let\'s just wait for five more days and don\'t forget to enjoy every day so that you will not get tired in your work. :)
~Teacher Rain~
Time is very fast.
>> CORRECT
During weekend, I didn\'t go anywhere.
>> Last weekend, I didn\'t go anywhere.
OR>> During the weekend, I didn\'t go anywhere.
I stayed at home but I couldn\'t have free time.
>> I stayed at home, but I couldn\'t have a free time.
I was very busy. I don\'t know why.
>> CORRECT
I need more weekend for me.. I have to wait a week for new weekend.
>> I need more weekend. I have to wait five days more for the next weekend.
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