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I am always going on a diet in my life but I never succeeded. So I am sometimes disappointed in myself.
I also told my daughter she has to go on a diet, despite I didn't go on a diet.
After said, I am always disappointed in myself.
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~~ Teacher Kathy
I am always going on a diet in my life but I never succeeded. So I am sometimes disappointed in myself.
>> I always plan to go on a diet but I always fail and that\'s what made me feel disappointed.
I also told my daughter she has to go on a diet, despite I didn\'t go on a diet.
I also told my daughter she has to go on a diet, despite I didn\'t go on a diet.
>> I always tell my daughter that she has to go on a diet even if I\'m not doing it.
After said, I am always disappointed in myself.
After said, I am always disappointed in myself.
>> After all, I am already disappointed.
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