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2018-01-12 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

I don't know advantage of my town. My daughter wants to learn art. So she wants to go to the art academy but there are not the cram school in my town. My town is located in the countryside. I want to move a city. There are a lot of the various academies.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Ms. [이름]!(\",)

Well, you said you are going to move to the city after Chanmi\'s middle school graduation so I guess you\'ll realize that dream next year. Thank you for finishing your homework on time. Have a happy weekend!

Take care!(\",)

~T. Lynn

I don\'t know advantage of my town.

>> I don\'t know the advantage of my town.
My daughter wants to learn art.

>> correct!
So she wants to go to the art academy but there are not the cram school in my town.

>> So she wants to attend an art academy but there are no art schools in my town.
My town is located in the countryside.

>> correct!
I want to move a city.

>> I want to move to the city.
There are a lot of the various academies.

>> There are various academies there.

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