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I am trying to make a good family for my children.
But it is not easy.
I think all family have to try together to grow up in an ideal family environment.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [이름]!(\",)
You are right. As the saying goes \" in unity, there\'s strength.\"
Take care!(\",)
~T. Lynn
I am trying to make a good family for my children.
>> correct!
OR>> I\'m trying my best to give the best family environment for my children.
But it is not easy.
>> correct!
I think all family have to try together to grow up in an ideal family environment.
>> correct!
OR>> I think in order to have an ideal family environment, all members of the family must work together.
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