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My office is busy and big.
>> My workplace is busy and spacious.
There are a lot of employee and a staff cafeteria.
>> There are a lot of employees and cafeteria staff.
In the backyard, there are a lot of conterners to export and import.
>> At the backyard, there are a lot of containers for import and export.
So my office is very noisy all day.
>> Correct
Many colleagues sometimes have to work in lunch time.
>> Many colleagues sometimes have to work at lunchtime.
or
>> Many colleagues sometimes have to work during lunchtime.
It is very bad.
>> Correct
or
>> It\'s not bad.
So it is very dangerous to work but I work in the office safely.
>> So, it is a bit dangerous at work but I work in the office safely.
or
>> So, it is a bit hazardous at work but I work in the office safely.
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