20-Dec-2016 [이름]'s homwork

2016-12-30 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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<Subject> what you would do to improve the world? Think of actions you could take to help make the world a better place. <answer> This subject is very profound. That is a lot of have thinked to me. I have been making for better place that I do one's best of 'forgive' to hurt to me. My friend said at this question, "I will Iron Man!" So that I was many shocked. His mental is certainly abnormal. Flankly He is my boyfriend..

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! ^_^

Thank you very much for answering our essay question and doing your best to give good answers.

I agree with you when you said forgiving the people who hurt us would help make this world a better place to live in.

Maybe because it gives us peace of mind.

Anyhow, that is my opinion to this matter.

See you again later.

Take care.

~Teacher Charry :)

This subject is very profound.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> This subject is very intellectual in nature. 

That is a lot of have thinked to me.

>> I had to think a lot about it.
I have been making for better place that I do one\'s best of \'forgive\' to hurt to me.

>> [Do you mean]: I have been thinking, the best way to make the world a better place to live in is to forgive the people who hurt me.
My friend said at this question, \"I will Iron Man!\"

>> My friend\'s answer to this question is, \"I will be Iron Man!\"
So that I was many shocked.

>> I was so shocked. 

OR >> I was so shocked with his answer. 
 His mental is certainly abnormal. 

>> His thinking is certainly abnormal. 
Flankly He is my boyfriend..

>> Frankly, he is my boyfriend.

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