20-Dec-2016 [이름]'s homwork
학생이 쓴 원문
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Hi, [이름]! ^_^
Thank you very much for answering our essay question and doing your best to give good answers.
I agree with you when you said forgiving the people who hurt us would help make this world a better place to live in.
Maybe because it gives us peace of mind.
Anyhow, that is my opinion to this matter.
See you again later.
Take care.
~Teacher Charry :)
This subject is very profound.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> This subject is very intellectual in nature.
That is a lot of have thinked to me.
>> I had to think a lot about it.
I have been making for better place that I do one\'s best of \'forgive\' to hurt to me.
>> [Do you mean]: I have been thinking, the best way to make the world a better place to live in is to forgive the people who hurt me.
My friend said at this question, \"I will Iron Man!\"
>> My friend\'s answer to this question is, \"I will be Iron Man!\"
So that I was many shocked.
>> I was so shocked.
OR >> I was so shocked with his answer.
His mental is certainly abnormal.
>> His thinking is certainly abnormal.
Flankly He is my boyfriend..
>> Frankly, he is my boyfriend.
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