2011-04-28

2011-04-29 · 첨삭 강사 Sarah

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I have to study English hard. Because I will go to Sydney with my babies. I really want to speak English fluently. My babies also have to speak English very well. Before marrige, I went many counrties for trip. So I wanted to go abroad to study launge and learn cultures. But I didn't do that. I think it isn't late. After 3 years, I will leave with babies. Actually, I worry about my husband. But that will be okay. We trust each other. Anyway I do study hard. Don't waste time!! Good luck to me.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ms. [Name]! You're absolutely correct! Being a good speaker in English will help you and oyur family to be successful someday! Just keep on practicing! Aja! heheheehee....That's the spirit! You should never give up. It's never too late to study something. Learning is forever.- - Sarah--   I have to study English hard.  >>CORRECTBecause I will go to Sydney with my babies.  >>CORRECTI really want to speak English fluently. >>CORRECTMy babies also have to speak English very well.  >>CORRECTBefore marrige, I went many counrties for trip.  >>Before getting married, I went to many countries for trips. >>Before my marriage, I went to many countries for trips.So I wanted to go abroad to study launge and learn cultures.  >>So, I wanted to go abroad to study language and learn cultures.But I didn't do that. >>cORRECTI think it isn't late.  >>CORRECTAfter 3 years, I will leave with babies. >>After 3 years, I will leave with my babies.Actually, I worry about my husband. >>CORRECT But that will be okay.  >>CORRECTWe trust each other.  >>CORRECTAnyway I do study hard. >>CORRECT Don't waste time!! >>CORRECTGood luck to me. >>CORRECT

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