2011-06-22
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Sarah .
I'm sorry to take your phone today.
Because I woke up so early beacause of my son.
My son pulled down me to hang out with him.
So I was so tired.
I fell as[이름]p at 10. so I couldn't answer your phone.
Have a good night. See you.. Bye
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름], it뭩 a wonderful day today and I hope you enjoy the rest of the day!
Here are the corrections:
Hi, Sarah .
>>Hi Sarah. I'm sorry to take your phone today.
>>I뭢 sorry about our phone class today.Because I woke up so early beacause of my son.
>>I woke up so early because of my son.My son pulled down me to hang out with him.
>>My son pulled me down to hang out/play with him.So I was so tired.
>>That뭩 why I was so tired.I fell as[이름]p at 10. so I couldn't answer your phone.
>>I fell as[이름]p at 10 so I wasn뭪 able to answer your call.Have a good night. See you.. Bye
>>Have a good night and see you tomorrow. Bye!
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