2011-06-22

2011-06-23 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi, Sarah . I'm sorry to take your phone today. Because I woke up so early beacause of my son. My son pulled down me to hang out with him. So I was so tired. I fell as[이름]p at 10. so I couldn't answer your phone. Have a good night. See you.. Bye

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], it뭩 a wonderful day today and I hope you enjoy the rest of the day! Here are the corrections: Hi, Sarah .  >>Hi Sarah. I'm sorry to take your phone today.  >>I뭢 sorry about our phone class today.Because I woke up so early beacause of my son. >>I woke up so early because of my son.My son pulled down me to hang out with him. >>My son pulled me down to hang out/play with him.So I was so tired.  >>That뭩 why I was so tired.I fell as[이름]p at 10. so I couldn't answer your phone. >>I fell as[이름]p at 10 so I wasn뭪 able to answer your call.Have a good night. See you.. Bye >>Have a good night and see you tomorrow. Bye!

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