2011-10-19
학생이 쓴 원문
After class, I will go to hospital with my son to prevent a cold.
Before being cold, most children have a shot not to catch a cold.
I worry that he is crying so much. he's scared just hospital.
But it's essential for baby to have a shot.
Be careful not to have a cold.
Byebye~
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ma'am Amy! What a pleasant surprise to see you here on this portion of our site. Well, contrary to my delight is my heartfelt sympathy to your son. Let us hope for the best for him and may he be brave enough to understand that the hospital is there to help him. Well, he is a child, it takes time for him to understand.
Today, good luck and take care. I agree, we all should keep fit to avoid extra expenses at home. See you in class, Ma'am Amy!
~T. Dona
After class, I will go to hospital with my son to prevent a cold.>> After class, I will go to the hospital with my son to prevent him from getting colds.Before being cold, most children have a shot not to catch a cold. >> Before getting colds, most children have a shot not to catch a cold.I worry that he is crying so much. he's scared just hospital. >> I worry that he cries so much, he's just scared of the hospital.But it's essential for baby to have a shot. >> But it's essential for a baby to have a shot.Be careful not to have a cold.
>> Correct! Or also: Be careful not to have colds.Byebye~
>> Bye./ Bye-bye!
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