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Today topic is my dream. When i was child. I wanted to be a translator. From that time I like English. The dream continued until when I was at middle school. And when I was at high school, I wanted to be a history teacher. I'm interested in culture and other country. Nowasays I want to be a cruise attendant. I think my all dreams relate each other. And everyone who is around me said, you and cruise attendant are good match. I agree that. I like people, learning language, and travel. I'll try to be a cruise attendant.

Hello [이름] my dear! I really had a great time reading your composition. Well, good luck to your dreams and I know you can achieve it. On the other note, you were able to express your ideas pretty well. However, please check your spelling and improve your sentence construction. Have a great day! xoxoxoxo T.Camille Today topic is my dream. >>My topic for today is about my dream.When i was child. I wanted to be a translator. >> When I was a child, I wanted to be a translator.From that time I like English. >>From then on, I started to like English language.The dream continued until when I was at middle school. >>I had the same dream until I got into Middle school.And when I was at high school, I wanted to be a history teacher. >> Correct.I'm interested in culture and other country. >> I'm interested in studying culture and other countries.Nowasays I want to be a cruise attendant. >> Nowadays, I want to be a cruise attendant.I think my all dreams relate each other. >>Correct.And everyone who is around me said, you and cruise attendant are good match. >> And everyone who is around me say that I can be a good attendant.I agree that. I like people, learning language, and travel. >>I agree to that. I really like travelling, learning about people and language. I'll try to be a cruise attendant. >>Correct.