2011. 5. 15
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi^^
Today is teacher's day in Korea.
So, today I want to talk about teacher.
I think that my test score is directly proportional with how much i like a teacher.
For example, whea I was at a high school, I like history teacher and every my history test score was a good, usually there were over 85.
However, I don't like Chinese character teacher, my score was bad.
Actually, every situation has an exception.
I didn't have feeling about math teacher, but my math score was very bad.
Anyway, as a result, teacher is very important to students.
It is truth that never change.
강사 첨삭
Hi my dear [이름]!:)
Good morning! Thank you for your composition about teachers. Always value your teachers because their role is to help you with your studies.
Today is teacher's day in Korea.
>> Correct.So, today I want to talk about teacher.
>> So, today I want to talk about teachers.I think that my test score is directly proportional with how much i like a teacher.
>> I think that my test score is directly proportional as to how much i like a teacher.
>> I think that my test score depends on my teacher. If I like her, I can get a high grade.
For example, whea I was at a high school, I like history teacher and every my history test score was a good, usually there were over 85.
>> For example, when I was in high school, I like my History teacher so my History grade was usually above 85.However, I don't like Chinese character teacher, my score was bad.
>> However, I don't like the attitude of my Chinese teacher so my score was bad.Actually, every situation has an exception.
>> Correct.I didn't have feeling about math teacher, but my math score was very bad.
>> I don't have any bad feelings about my Math teacher, but my math score was also very bad.Anyway, as a result, teacher is very important to students.
>> Anyway, teachers are very important to students.
>> Anyway, a teacher is very important to a student.It is truth that never change.
>> It is a truth that will never change.
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