2011. 5. 15

2011-05-16 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hi^^ Today is teacher's day in Korea. So, today I want to talk about teacher. I think that my test score is directly proportional with how much i like a teacher. For example, whea I was at a high school, I like history teacher and every my history test score was a good, usually there were over 85. However, I don't like Chinese character teacher, my score was bad. Actually, every situation has an exception. I didn't have feeling about math teacher, but my math score was very bad. Anyway, as a result, teacher is very important to students. It is truth that never change.

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Hi my dear [이름]!:) Good morning! Thank you for your composition about teachers. Always value your teachers because their role is to help you with your studies. Today is teacher's day in Korea. >> Correct.So, today I want to talk about teacher. >> So, today I want to talk about teachers.I think that my test score is directly proportional with how much i like a teacher. >> I think that my test score is directly proportional as to how much i like a teacher. >> I think that my test score depends on my teacher. If I like her, I can get a high grade. For example, whea I was at a high school, I like history teacher and every my history test score was a good, usually there were over 85. >> For example, when I was in high school, I like my History teacher so my History grade was usually above 85.However, I don't like Chinese character teacher, my score was bad. >> However, I don't like the attitude of my Chinese teacher so my score was bad.Actually, every situation has an exception. >> Correct.I didn't have feeling about math teacher, but my math score was very bad. >> I don't have any bad feelings about my Math teacher, but my math score was also very bad.Anyway, as a result, teacher is very important to students. >> Anyway, teachers are very important to students. >> Anyway, a teacher is very important to a student.It is truth that never change. >> It is a truth that will never change.

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