2011, 5, 17
학생이 쓴 원문
Today, I wanna telling about my third grade in a high school.
In Korea have huge test for entering a univercity at end of last grade in high school.
So during last grade we spend hard time.
However, I think when I was in a 3rd grade is the best time in my life.
Me and my friends had been close since we were spending a hard time.
I think sometimes to broke the rule is very exciting.
One day in the morning, I was sick, but after lunch time I was
getting better.
However, I wanted sleep deeply and completly, so I acted like person
who are very sick.
Finally, I went back home early.
I'll never forget my last grade in my life.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름] my dear..:)
I totally agree with you when you said that sometimes, its really exciting to break some rules...thats...if you didnt get caught..kkkk...:D
Anyway, its really nice to read some stories about your high school life..
Keep smiling my dear..
Talk to you again tomorrow..
T.Cam
>>Today Im gonna tell you about my life when I was in third year high school.
In Korea have huge test for entering a univercity at end of last grade in high school.
In Korea have huge test for entering a univercity at end of last grade in high school.
>>In Korea,4th year high school students usually undergo an Entrance exam in entering a very good university.
So during last grade we spend hard time.
So during last grade we spend hard time.
>>So during my 4th year, I had a very difficult time studying.
However, I think when I was in a 3rd grade is the best time in my life.
However, I think when I was in a 3rd grade is the best time in my life.
>>However, I consider my third year in high school as the best time of my life.
Me and my friends had been close since we were spending a hard time.
Me and my friends had been close since we were spending a hard time.
>>I and my friends became close because we were having hard time together.
I think sometimes to broke the rule is very exciting.
I think sometimes to broke the rule is very exciting.
>>Sometimes, I think that breaking the rule is also exciting.
One day in the morning, I was sick, but after lunch time I was
getting better.
One day in the morning, I was sick, but after lunch time I was
getting better.
>>There was once that I got sick in the morning, but latter got better after lunch.
However, I wanted sleep deeply and completly, so I acted like person
who are very sick.
However, I wanted sleep deeply and completly, so I acted like person
who are very sick.
>>However, I wanted to sleep so I acted like a sick person.
Finally, I went back home early.
Finally, I went back home early.
>>correct!
I'll never forget my last grade in my life.
I'll never forget my last grade in my life.
>>correct!
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