2011 is the rabbit's year.
학생이 쓴 원문
Every year has one of 12 kinds of animals in Korea.
Its animal returns every 12 years.
According to the story of the legend,
once upon a time, God let many animals come to do a formal bow of respect to him on the first day of the first lunar month.
He also said that 12 animals ordered by coming to him would win prizes.
The cattle thought that he couldn't win if he started with other animals at the same time. So he left on the previous day.
The smart mouse found it so he rode on the cattle's tale.
When the tiger confident of running started in the next morning, the mouse and cattle arrived at the door.
Before the cattle entering, the mouse getting off its tale rushed and entered first.
The rabbit also started with the tiger, it was late due to a nap.
So your animal is the smart mouse :)
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I was wondering, where are the other eight animals? Haha!
It’s a great story, though it sounded like a kid’s story it is still interesting!
-Tiny^0^
Every year has one of 12 kinds of animals in Korea.
>> Every year has one of the 12 kinds of animals in Korea.
Its animal returns every 12 years.
>> Each animal returns every 12 years.
>>(As I understand your sentence the first word should be “each”)According to the story of the legend,
>> According to the legend,once upon a time, God let many animals come to do a formal bow of respect to him on the first day of the first lunar month.
>>CorrectHe also said that 12 animals ordered by coming to him would win prizes.
>>He also said that the first 12 animals to come to him would win prizes.
The cattle thought that he couldn't win if he started with other animals at the same time. So he left on the previous day.
>> The cattle thought that he couldn't win if he started with other animals at the same time, so he left on the previous day.The smart mouse found it so he rode on the cattle's tale.
>> The smart mouse found out about it so he rode on the cattle's tail.
>> spelling check: tailWhen the tiger confident of running started in the next morning, the mouse and cattle arrived at the door.
>> When the tiger, confident of running, started the next morning, the mouse and the cattle arrived at the door.Before the cattle entering, the mouse getting off its tale rushed and entered first.
>> Before the cattle has entered, the mouse got off its tail and rushed to enter first.
>> spelling check: tail
The rabbit also started with the tiger, it was late due to a nap.
>> The rabbit also started with the tiger. It was late due to a nap.
So your animal is the smart mouse :)
>>Haha! Correct!
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