2012-03-06

It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay [A] I don't agree. because, city life keep developement everyday. Nowaday, city life can give children to contect with many expreiment. That helping chindren to find enemy character. And if mother want make freely chirend, she would visit aroud city. becase, There is no light to enter the country. up and down, live in country boy is good too. because, he can go to city too! ------------------------------- have a good day~ see you tomorrw~hihihi. :)))

Hello, Su [이름].It\'s a very complicated question for me. I think both have their advantages and disadvantages. The countryside surely provides benefits such as cleaner air, less noise and a calmer lifestyle, the benefits of living in a big city far outweigh those of living in the countryside. This is due to the fact that children can gain a better education and more cultural experiences when they grow up in a big city. Teacher MichelleHere are some corrections for you:It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city.>>CorrectDo you agree or disagree? >>CorrectUse specific reasons and examples to develop your essay>>CorrectI don\'t agree. >>Correctbecause, city life keep developement everyday.>>Because, the city life keeps developing everyday.Nowaday, city life can give children curious [이름]ds.>>Nowadays, the city life can give children to contect with many expreiment.That helping chindren to find enemy character.>>That may teach children to build bad characters.And if mother want make freely chirend, she would visit aroud city.>>And if mothers want their children fell free, they would visit around the city.becase, There is no light to enter the country.>>Because, there is no light to enter the country.up and down, live in country boy is good too.>>Living in a country is good, too.because, he can go to city too!>>Because, he can still have a chance to visit the city, too!have a good day~>>Have a good day~see you tomorrw~hihihi. :))) >>See you tomorrow~hihihi. :)))