2012.03.22 homework!
학생이 쓴 원문
1) If Oliver found money, he would not keep it.
2) If they didn't wear pullovers in the mountains, it would be too cold during the night.
3) If Tony knew her phone number, he wouldn't give it to Frank.
4) If we didn't visited this museum, you would not write a good report.
5) If it isn't be so late, we would play a game of chess.
6) If Jeff doesn't not like Jessica, he wouldn't buy her an ice-cream.
7) If I was you, I wouldn't go to Eric's party.
8) If you drop this bottle, it wounldn't break.
9) If she doesn't bully her classmates, she would have more friends.
10) If he doesn't printed the document, I wounldn't correct it.
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Hellow!
I did homework today too!!!
But, I can't draw up an tomorrow.
Cause, I have to do something important to make a file.
The file is basic information of payment for employee.
It is serious work.
So,I need to pay attention only one thing making file.
See you~★
강사 첨삭
A happy Thursday to you! Okay, I understand if you can\'t make it tomorrow. Take your time making that file because I know it\'s important for you. Enjoy the rest of the night and have a fabulous day tomorrow.
T. Michelle
1.If Oliver found money, he would not keep it.
>>Correct.2) If they didn\'t wear pullovers in the mountains, it would be too cold during the night.
>>Correct.3) If Tony knew her phone number, he wouldn\'t give it to Frank.
>> Correct.4) If we didn\'t visited this museum, you would not write a good report.
>> If we did not visit this museum, you would not write a good report.5) If it isn\'t be so late, we would play a game of chess.
>> If it was not so late, we would play a game of chess.6) If Jeff doesn\'t not like Jessica, he wouldn\'t buy her an ice-cream.
>> If Jeff did not like Jessica, he would not buy her an ice-cream.7) If I was you, I wouldn\'t go to Eric\'s party.
>> If I were you, I would not go to Eric\'s party.
8) If you drop this bottle, it wounldn\'t break.
>> If you dropped this bottle, it would not break.9) If she doesn\'t bully her classmates, she would have more friends.
>> If she did not bully her classmates, she would have more friends.10) If he doesn\'t printed the document, I wounldn\'t correct it.
>> If he did not print the document, I would not correct it.--------------------------------------------------------------------------Hellow!
>>Hello.I did homework today too!!!
>>Correct.But, I can\'t draw up an tomorrow.
>>But, I can\'t answer you tomorrow.Cause, I have to do something important to make a file.
>> Cause, I have to do something important: to make a file.The file is basic information of payment for employee.
>>Correct.It is serious work.
>>Correct.So,I need to pay attention only one thing making file.
>>So, I need to pay attention to only one thing and that\'s making the file.See you~★
>>Correct.
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