2012.03-28
학생이 쓴 원문
It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
None. There is notthing.
I Think, This year is hard to economy side.
So, more and more hard to get a work.
than, opening of the store? Ooh.I think that not a good idea.
hum... today, I don't have nothing to say.
Ah..,Today, my boiler machine was broken!!!!
I bath cold water. It feel like shaking haire in freeze lake water.
And than, My fever was being high. So, I can't go to the school.
But, now, I'm here in work-place. :)))))
thay don't accep absence. and I recovered now.
hahaha.
See you tomorrow~
강사 첨삭
Hi^^
Too bad you had a cold shower today ^^ Well look at the brighter side, don\'t you know that cold water is good for your hair? kk Check out the corrections I made for you. I commend you for answering the question while elaborating your opinion^^ See you in class^^
T\' Michelle^^
It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood.
>>CORRECT!
Do you support or oppose this plan?
>>CORRECT!
Why?
>>CORRECT!
Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
>>CORRECT!None.
>>CORRECT!
There is notthing.
>>There is no shopping center nearby.I Think, This year is hard to economy side.
>> I think, this year our economy is on its down side.So, more and more hard to get a work.
>> So, we need to work harder to get a job.than, opening of the store?
>> Then, they say we\'d open a store?
Ooh.I think that not a good idea.
>>Oh, I think it is not a good idea.hum... today, I don\'t have nothing to say.>> Today, I don\'t have anything to say.Ah..,Today, my boiler machine was broken!!!!
>> Today, my heater was broken.I bath cold water.
>>I bathed with cold water.It feel like shaking haire in freeze lake water.
>> It felt like my hair froze in the lake water. And than, My fever was being high. So, I can\'t go to the school.
>>And then, my fever went high so I can\'t go to the school.
But, now, I\'m here in work-place. :)))))
>> But now, I am here in my work place.thay don\'t accep absence.
>>They don\'t allow absence.and I recovered now.
>> I recovered now.hahaha.See you tomorrow~
>> See you tomorrow.
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