2012-04-09
학생이 쓴 원문
1.already : She already submited her report.
2.answer : You don't have to answer this time.
3.apparent : Dinosaur is apparent !!!
4.appearance : the machine's appearance was bring many changeing.
5.athlete : My friend 'dong-hwa' is drea[이름]g be a athlete of Korea.
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강사 첨삭
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T. Michelle
1.already : She already submited her report.
>>She already submitted her report.2.answer : You don\'t have to answer this time.
>>Correct3.apparent : Dinosaur is apparent !!!
>>Correct4.appearance : the machine\'s appearance was bring many changeing.
>>The machine\'s appearance brought a lot of change.5.athlete : My friend \'dong-hwa\' is drea[이름]g be a athlete of Korea.
>>My friend Dong-Hwa is drea[이름]g to be an athlete of Korea.
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