2012-04-25
학생이 쓴 원문
I think, this time, there is no answer.
Because, live place express one's life and one's life style.
In my case, I will frequently move all around world.
Bacause, My dream is to be a flight attendent. So, I will visit many country many time.
So, I can't stay at home as usual woman.
that meaning is that my life will be light and lonely and I will have
many place to release not my own place. just release.
But,As you know, this life is unusual life. to see many things, to meet many person, to visit something new.
So, I traded this pleasuer with my live place. and relese.
but, I can't do this in my entire life. I will quite 8 years later.
and than I will settle down in korea.
So. My answer is it up to you.
as just add my think,
just do it what you want.life is past and you can't go back.
there is no answer to live.
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강사 첨삭
Hello there dear^_^ Thank you so much for sending your composition^_^ Also, thank you for sharing something about your plans. I know it will be a tough one. I hope you choose the thing that can make you happy.
T. Michelle
I think, this time, there is no answer.
>>>CORRECTBecause, live place express one\'s life and one\'s life style.
>>>Because, living in a certain place expresses one\'s life and one\'s lifestyle.In my case, I will frequently move all around world.
>>>In my case, I will frequently move all around the world.Bacause, My dream is to be a flight attendent.
>>>Because, my dream is to be a flight attendant.
So, I will visit many country many time.
>>>So, I will visit many countries for many times.
>>>So, I will visit many countries often.So, I can\'t stay at home as usual woman.
>>>So, I can\'t stay at home like a usual woman.that meaning is that my life will be light and lonely and I will havemany place to release not my own place. just release.
>>>It means that my life will be light and lonely. And I will have many places to release my stress not just in my own place.But,As you know, this life is unusual life. to see many things, to meet many person, to visit something new.
>>>But as you know, this kind of life is unusual like seeing many things, meeting many people and visiting something new.So, I traded this pleasuer with my live place. and relese.but, I can\'t do this in my entire life.
>>>So I traded this pleasure to my own place and just let it be. But, I can\'t do this in my entire life.
I will quite 8 years later.
>>>Or After 8 years, I will quite.
>>>I will quite after 8 years.and than I will settle down in korea.
>>>And I will settle down in Korea.So. My answer is it up to you.
>>>So my answer is up to you.as just add my think,
>>>Just consider my idea.just do it what you want.life is past and you can\'t go back.
>>>Just do want you want because we can never go back to our past.there is no answer to live.
>>>There is no answer about our future(I\'m not sure about your idea.)
>>>There is no answer to life.
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