2013.03.06 Homework

2013-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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Do you think it is necessary to cut the friendly relationship with someone of the opposite sex if one is already married? I don't think it is something you must do. The point is how close you and your opposite sex friend are and how you handle the relationship between two. If my husband hanged out with his female friend too often, I would feel bothered. (I want to express the feeling that I would keep caring about that kind of worried? and that keep bothering me.) And, It depends on what they do. I don't mind thay talk together over coffee but I mind going a movie. It is allowed for my husband to hang out with a group of female friends. of course it is a rare situation if chance is given to him. In conclusion, there is one thing I need to do before I discuss this topic. I need to meet some guy and get married and then we can have a discussion over this topic again.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]!!! A pleasant Thursday morning~~~ Thanks for this composition! Actually, I was smiling while reading it... :) And I totally agree that you need to do the most important step first  (to meet someone and be married) before you could put yourself into this position to be able to answer effectively...kkkk Kindly check some corrections I made for you! ^^ Have a nice day and see you in class! T.Kristel Do you think it is necessary to cut the friendly relationship with someone of the opposite sex if one is already married?I don\'t think it is something you must do. >>CORRECT!! The point is how close you and your opposite sex friend are and how you handle the relationship between two. >>The important consideration is how close you and your friend of the opposite sex are and how you two handle the relationship.If my husband hanged out with his female friend too often, I would feel bothered. (I want to express the feeling that I would keep caring about that kind of worried? and that keep bothering me.) >> If my husband hang out with his female friend too often, I would feel bothered. (I want to express the feeling that I would keep caring about that kind of worry? and that keeps bothering me.) >>You could use the vocabulary pet peeve. And, It depends on what they do. I don\'t mind thay talk together over coffee but I mind going a movie. >>CORRECT!! I won\'t mind if they talk over coffee but I would mind if they go to the movies. It is allowed for my husband to hang out with a group of female friends. of course it is a rare situation if chance is given to him. >>CORRECT!! Of course, giving him a chance like that would be rare. >> I would allow my husband to hang out with a group of female friends. Of course, giving him a chance like that would be rare.In conclusion, there is one thing I need to do before I discuss this topic. >>CORRECT!! I need to meet some guy and get married and then we can have a discussion over this topic again. >>CORRECT!!

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