2013.03.11 HW -2nd

Next,about 20 % of students are a bit interested in studying at least. They try to study and pay attention on the lesson depending on the topic. The students lose attention easily when the topic they learn is not exciting and not their interest. Therefore, teachers need to crack jokes in a lesson in order to keep attracting them to the lesson. Last, the rest of them always enjoy the lesson whether the topic is exciting or not. Moreover, they have a strong will to learn something all the time. However, they could lose attention in the lesson without jokes for a long time and then they would transfer to other institute.To sum up, Teachers are required to have a sense of humor and a skill to entertain students by craking jokes in a good timing for retaining students' interest and attention on the lesson. It is also important for running a business.

Hello there [이름]~~ You indeed enjoy answering this question I guess...kkk Anyway, here\'s the second part of the corrections. :) Have a nice day and see you in class! T.Kristel Next,about 20 % of students are a bit interested in studying at least. >>CORRECT!! They try to study and pay attention on the lesson depending on the topic. >>CORRECT!! The students lose attention easily when the topic they learn is not exciting and not their interest. >>CORRECT!!  Therefore, teachers need to crack jokes in a lesson in order to keep attracting them to the lesson. >>CORRECT!! >> Therefore, teachers need to crack jokes in a lesson in order to keep them focused to the lesson. Last, the rest of them always enjoy the lesson whether the topic is exciting or not. >> CORRECT!!  Moreover, they have a strong will to learn something all the time. >>CORRECT!!  However, they could lose attention in the lesson without jokes for a long time and then they would transfer to other institute. >> However, they could lose attention in the lesson without jokes for a long time and then they would transfer to other institutes/institutions. To sum up, Teachers are required to have a sense of humor and a skill to entertain students by craking jokes in a good timing for retaining students\' interest and attention on the lesson. >> To sum up, Teachers are required to have a sense of humor and a skill to entertain students by craking jokes in a good timing to maintain the students\' interest and attention on the lesson. It is also important for running a business. >>It is also important when running a business.