2013.03.11Homework-1st

Cracking jokes in a lesson is definitely necessary. In particular, it's a vital element of the lesson for a class of elementary school students in the institutes. I'm confident to tell about it because I am a teacher at an English institute. I'm going to write some reasons based (in the basis on ?) my experiences and they might be applied on the main subjects such as math, English, Korean writing. These three subject are notorious for least favorite subjects to students. I will divide into three catagories of the students to make readers understand easier (easy?). They are "Mom,you are wasting money", "I'm ok with a institute" and bookworms. Let's talk about the first group named "Mom, you're wasting money." Most of the students ,more than 70% who come to the institutes are included in this group. They are sent to the institute by mom's force.(pushing?) They are not interested in studying at all. all they pay attention on are games and jokes which keep them coming to the institute

Hello there [이름]~~ A pleasant Tuesday morning! This is great! I am glad that you\'re answering your homework based on your personal experiences coz it\'s easier for me to relate as well. :) Anyway, teaching is really tough coz it requires a lot of patience and self control....kkk Please check the corrections I made here. Have a nice day and see you! T.Kristel Cracking jokes in a lesson is definitely necessary. In particular, it\'s a vital element of the lesson for a class of elementary school students in the institutes. >>CORRECT!!! CORRECT!!! I\'m confident to tell about it because I am a teacher at an English institute. >>CORRECT!!! I\'m going to write some reasons based (in the basis on ?) my experiences and they might be applied on the main subjects such as math, English, Korean writing. >> I\'m going to write some reasons based on my personal experiences and they might be applied on the main subjects such as math, English and Korean writing. These three subject are notorious for least favorite subjects to students. I will divide into three catagories of the students to make readers understand easier (easy?). >> These three subjects are notorious as least favorite subjects of students. I will divide the students into three catagories to make readers understand it easier. They are \"Mom,you are wasting money\", \"I\'m ok with a institute\" and bookworms. Let\'s talk about the first group named \"Mom, you\'re wasting money.\" >> They are the \"Mom,you are wasting money\", \"I\'m ok with an institute\" and bookworms. Let\'s talk about the first group named \"Mom, you\'re wasting money.\" Most of the students ,more than 70% who come to the institutes are included in this group. They are sent to the institute by mom\'s force.(pushing?) >> CORRECT!!! CORRECT!!! They are sent to the institute because their moms said so. They are not interested in studying at all. all they pay attention on are games and jokes which keep them coming to the institute >>CORRECT!!!  CORRECT!!!