2013.03.13HW

Describe your ideal house and neighborhood.(I ne Location of the house and access to the mart from the house is so important to me. therefore, my dream house should have easy access to the mart. it would be better to be close to the department store and yoga institute. However , later is not nevessary but optioal. In terms of the location, the house must face North otherwise it is freezing in winter and hot in summer. In respect of the size, I don't want that big apartment. Even though I have enough money to be afford to it, I would not purchase it. The atmosphere should not be noisy too much due to drunk people. The fact is that I am looking for my new place but I haven't found it yet. My contract is going to expire soon. Fancy house is not I want, all I need is clean and cozy apartment. Let me find nice new place.(I'm crying T_T)

Hello there [이름]!! A pleasant morning to you~~ Thanks for doing your homework! :) Anyway, I hope you do find a new place very soon! :) Keep your fingers crossed! You\'ll soon find something that would suit your taste! :) Have faith! Anyway, please check the corrections I made for you. Have a nice day and see you! T.Kristel Describe your ideal house and neighborhood.Location of the house and access to the mart from the house is so important to me. >>CORRECT!!  therefore, my dream house should have easy access to the mart. >>CORRECT!!  it would be better to be close to the department store and yoga institute. >>CORRECT!!  However , later is not nevessary but optioal. In terms of the location, the house must face North otherwise it is freezing in winter and hot in summer. >> However , the later is not necessary but optioal. In terms of the location, the house must face North otherwise it would be freezing in winter and hot in summer.  In respect of the size, I don\'t want that big apartment. Even though I have enough money to be afford to it, I would not purchase it. >>  In respect of the size, I don\'t want a big apartment. Even though I have enough money to afford it, I would not purchase it. The atmosphere should not be noisy too much due to drunk people. The fact is that I am looking for my new place but I haven\'t found it yet. >> The environment should not be too noisy due to drunk people. The fact is that I am looking for a new place but I haven\'t found it yet. My contract is going to expire soon. Fancy house is not I want, all I need is clean and cozy apartment. Let me find nice new place.(I\'m crying T_T) >>CORRECT!! A fancy house is not I want, all I need is a clean and cozy apartment. Let me find a nice new place.(I\'m crying T_T)