2013.03.13Question
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Could you check if the sentence below is correct? now I'm reviewing but I am not sure of them.
Thank you -[이름]-
For things that cost much like travelling, Family functions(can I use the word "anniversaries"?) First, I check when the money is needed, how much I need total and do math how much I have to save per month. (and, divide that much money by the number of months I have)
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Could you check if the sentence below is correct? now I\'m reviewing but I am not sure of them.
>>CORRECT!!Thank you -[이름]-
>>CORRECT!!For things that cost much like travelling, Family functions(can I use the word \"anniversaries\"?)
>>CORRECT!! (it\'s better if you say family gatherings) ^^
>>Note: Anniversaries is also correct however, it ,mostly pertains to specific dates being celebrated every year.
First, I check when the money is needed, how much I need total and do math how much I have to save per month. (and, divide that much money by the number of months I have)
>> First, I check when the money is needed, how much I need in total and do the math how much I have to save per month. (and, divide that much money by the number of months I have)
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