[20130527] Homework
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Essay:What can you say about this topic? Making a bad decision is better than making no decision. Do you agree or disagree? Why or why not?
Hi.I'm Alice. I feel very thank you that you say me cheer up.
Today's Topic is very hart to make a decision. Because It would be changed by many cases. Sometimes making a bad decision is better than making no decision, but other second method is better than 1st method.
For example, when we feel angry make no decision is better. Because when we feel anxious or angry, we can make very bad decision can't recovery like a word can hurt someone's mind.
But I think sometimes bad decision is better.
When we are traveling, nomality we have an our destination. But when we don't know how to go there, we can make a bad decision that take more time than we have no decision or right decision. But, I think that is better to make a bad decision. Because this moment be needed any decision. Like this sometimes a bad decision called "challenges".Goodnight!
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Hello there Ms. [Name]!
Thanks for posting your thoughts here.
Well, what more can I say but to agree with you.
It\'s good to do something rather not doing anything.
Try to avoid typographic errors. ^^
Also, the use of articles (a, an, the) and prepositions.
Anyway, you did a good job here.
Keep it up! ^^
I\'ll see you later in class! ^^
Always, T. Kathrine ^^
Essay:What can you say about this topic? Making a bad decision is better than making no decision. Do you agree or disagree? Why or why not?Hi.I\'m Alice. I feel very thank you that you say me cheer up.
>> Hi! I\'m Alice! I want to thank you for cheering me up. Today\'s Topic is very hart to make a decision.
>> Today\'s topic is really hard to make a decision.
Because It would be changed by many cases.
>> Because it would change many cases.
Sometimes making a bad decision is better than making no decision, but other second method is better than 1st method.
>> Sometimes, making a bad decision is better than making a no decision. But the second method is better than the first. For example, when we feel angry make no decision is better.
>> For example, when we feel angry, making no decision is better.
Because when we feel anxious or angry, we can make very bad decision can\'t recovery like a word can hurt someone\'s mind.
>> Because when we feel anxious or angry, we can make a very bad decision and we can\'t take it back like a word which can hurt somoeone\'s feelings. But I think sometimes bad decision is better.
>> CORRECTWhen we are traveling, nomality we have an our destination.
>> When we are traveling, normally, we have our own destination.
But when we don\'t know how to go there, we can make a bad decision that take more time than we have no decision or right decision.
>> But when we don\'t know where to go, we can make a bad decision and we take more time rather than having no decision at all.
But, I think that is better to make a bad decision.
>> CORRECT
Because this moment be needed any decision.
>> Because making a decision is needed in this situation.
Like this sometimes a bad decision called \"challenges\".
>> Sometimes, a bad decision is called \"challenges\".
Goodnight!
>> CORRECT
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