2014.01.02 Homework
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What is your motivation in studying the English language?
Motivation in studying Engllish language is a complex phenonmenon becasue each individual have different motivations. Some people would learn second langauge because of pratical goals such as promotion while others could study English for personal growth. However, I personally think that my motivation is intergrative motivation.
I started to learn Engisish when I was 7 years old. I took English class where native speaker was in charge of. When I took the English class, I felt more comfortable with Korean teacher than those who are native speakers. I was afraid that I might not understand what he or she said and I did not know how to tell my thought exactly. As teacher compliment my expression, I had confidence of using Engsish. Therefore, I could change my personality into extrovert and I am seldom afraid of speaking English. Based on my experience, I think that my motivation is realted to my personal growth.
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Hello there my dear!!
Thank you very much for sending me this!
I really loved reading it because it was so detailed. It made me imagine your story.kkk
Anyway, keep writing, reading, listening and most of all speaking to improve your skills. kkk
Have a burning Friday!~
See you on Monday~~
T.Kristel-
What is your motivation in studying the English language?Motivation in studying Engllish language is a complex phenonmenon becasue each individual have different motivations.>> The motivation in studying the English language is a complex phenomenon becasue each individual has different motivations.
Some people would learn second langauge because of pratical goals such as promotion while others could study English for personal growth.
>> Some people would learn a second language because of pratical goals such as promotions while others would study English for personal growth.
However, I personally think that my motivation is intergrative motivation.>> However, I personally think that my motivation is integrative.I started to learn Engisish when I was 7 years old. I took English class where native speaker was in charge of.
>> I started to learn English when I was 7 years old. I took an English class where a native speaker was the one in charged.
When I took the English class, I felt more comfortable with Korean teacher than those who are native speakers.
>> When I took the class, I felt more comfortable with Korean teachers than those who are native speakers.
I was afraid that I might not understand what he or she said and I did not know how to tell my thought exactly.
>> I was afraid that I might not understand what they say. Furthermore, I didn\'t know how to express my thoughts exactly.
As teacher compliment my expression, I had confidence of using Engsish.
>> As my teacher compliments my expressions, I felt confident speaking English.
Therefore, I could change my personality into extrovert and I am seldom afraid of speaking English.
>> Therefore, I could change my personality and be extrovert. Now, I am seldom afraid of speaking English.
Based on my experience, I think that my motivation is realted to my personal growth.
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