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학생이 쓴 원문
Long time no write!
I have wrote my answers for the questions in another article which we didn't treat Sep 17.
1. Are you familiar with the food?
A) I didn't know the food before I read the article. Also, I didn't know that Korean famous singer and entertainer, Lee Hyo-ri, updated several recipes of the food on her blog.
2. Will you try it if you have a chance?
A) I like other sorts of bean and bean-based food. I would like to see the picture of the bean at first.
3. Why do you think celebrities can influence sales of different products and services?
A) Everybody is interested in how celebrities live life, what they like and eat and so on. Some companies use the interest by supporting their products to the celebrities and requesting them to take photo with the products. They present the photo to the public and it is a marketing strategy.
강사 첨삭
Hello James!
It\'s great to check your homework again. Some reminders:
1. Long time, no write
They don\'t fit the standard English sentence pattern but, whatever educated users might think, they are idiomatic in the English of today.
2. The present perfect is formed from the present tense of the verb have and the past participle of a verb.
Teacher Venus^^
Long time no write!
>>>informal: Long time, no write!
>>>formal: I have not seen you for a long time.
I have wrote my answers for the questions in another article which we didn\'t treat Sep 17.>>>I have written my answers for the questions in another article which we didn\'t discuss yesterday.1. Are you familiar with the food?A) I didn\'t know the food before I read the article.
>>>I didn\'t know this food before I read the article.
Also, I didn\'t know that Korean famous singer and entertainer, Lee Hyo-ri, updated several recipes of the food on her blog.
>>>Also, I didn\'t know that Korean famous singer and entertainer, Lee Hyo-ri, updated several recipes of this food on her blog.
2. Will you try it if you have a chance?A) I like other sorts of bean and bean-based food.
>>>CORRECT
I would like to see the picture of the bean at first.
>>>CORRECT3. Why do you think celebrities can influence sales of different products and services?A) Everybody is interested in how celebrities live life, what they like and eat and so on.
>>>Everybody is interested in how celebrities live their life, what they like and eat and so on.
Some companies use the interest by supporting their products to the celebrities and requesting them to take photo with the products.
>>>Some companies use this interest by asking the celebritiesto support their products and requesting them to take a photo with the products.
They present the photo to the public and it is a marketing strategy.
>>>CORRECT
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