2016/11/14 Homework

I would draw 4 different drawings on North, South, West, East side. ①On the North Side: I would draw a big castle on the top of a stone mountain like Grand Canyon. And alsothere would be a withe Dragone breathing Fire on the top of the castle. ②On the South Side: I would draw a forest of Elfs. There is a clean stream in front of the forest and pretty femail elf riding a unicorn. And around the femail elf, there are many tiny elf flying. ③On the West side: I would draw a sophisticated magic city. There are Many buildings that have lights from the sky and there would a big yellow sphere like sun in the center of the city ④On the East side: I would draw an emerald blue sea. there would be some dolphines jumpimg on the sea and some people riding killerwhales.

Hello [이름]! ^^   Good job in describing what you would paint in your room. It\'s very imaginative. I had fun reading your essay. ^^ Let me give you some pointers though; > Your introductory sentence should tell the reader what you are writing about. > The numbers \'zero\' to \'nine\' is always written in words is descriptive writing. > Be careful of your spelling.   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==     I would draw 4 different drawings on North, South, West, East side.   ①On the North Side: I would draw a big castle on the top of a stone mountain like Grand Canyon. And alsothere would be a withe Dragone breathing Fire on the top of the castle. ②On the South Side: I would draw a forest of Elfs. There is a clean stream in front of the forest and pretty femail elf riding a unicorn. And around the femail elf, there are many tiny elf flying. ③On the West side: I would draw a sophisticated magic city. There are Many buildings that have lights from the sky and there would a big yellow sphere like sun in the center of the city ④On the East side: I would draw an emerald blue sea. there would be some dolphines jumpimg on the sea and some people riding killerwhales.   >> If I were a wonderful painter and my parents would let me paint anything I wanted on my bedroom walls, I would paint four different drawings on each wall of my room. Each wall would look like the following: 1. The first wall would have a painting of a big castle on top of a stone mountain and there would be a huge, fire-breathing dragon at the top of the castle. 2. The second wall would be a painting of an elven forest where there is a clean stream running through the forest and a pretty female elf riding a unicorn. There would also be many tiny elves flying around her. 3. The third wall\'s painting would be a sophisticated, magical city wherein there are many illuminated buildings and in the center of the city would be a big, sun-like, yellow sphere. 4.  The last wall\'s illustration would be that of an emerald-blue sea. It would show dolphins jumping through the waves and people riding killerwhales.