2016/11/18 Homework

If I could have a lunch with a famous person, I would want to have a lunch with Warren Buffett who is such a legendary Investor in the world. I would like to talk about how he have lived so far and what motivation made him to be so successful. Because I would like to learn a self management know-how from him to get reach a goal setted by own self.

Hello there [이름]! ^^   Good job in writing your essay. It has very minimal errors. ^^ One thing though, try not to start any sentence with \"but\", \"because\" as well as \"and\" because these conjunctions will cause an incomplete sentence. It is fine though to use these to start a sentence in SPOKEN English but never written English.   See you later! ^^   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==     If I could have a lunch with a famous person, I would want to have a lunch with Warren Buffett who is such a legendary Investor in the world. I would like to talk about how he have lived so far and what motivation made him to be so successful. Because I would like to learn a self management know-how from him to get reach a goal setted by own self.   >> If I could have lunch with a famous person, I would like to have lunch with Warren Buffet who is legendary in the business world. He is considered by some to be one of the most successful investors in the world. I would like to converse with him about how he has lived for so long and what motivated him to be so successful because I would like to learn self-management know-how from him so I would be able to reach my own goals.