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2016-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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If I would talk about wheather a monkey is a good pet or not, I would definitely say, monkey isn't a good pet because a monkey is not cute for me. I think when most of poeple who want to have a pet, they might choose their pets with how the pets are cute and pretty. And that is reason why most of the people like dogs and cats even monkeys are more clever than them.

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Hello [이름]! ^^   I would have to agree with you since monkeys could be kind of aggressive and very difficult to train. ^^   See you Wednesday!~~~   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==   If I would talk about wheather a monkey is a good pet or not, I would definitely say, monkey isn\'t a good pet because a monkey is not cute for me. I think when most of poeple who want to have a pet, they might choose their pets with how the pets are cute and pretty. And that is reason why most of the people like dogs and cats even monkeys are more clever than them.   >> If I were to say whether a monkey would be a good pet or not, I would definitely say that a monkey would not make a good pet because I personally think that they\'re not cute. In my opinion. people generally choose pets that are cute and pretty which is why most people go for cats or dogs even if monkeys are more clever than these kinds of pets.

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