2016.8.3 H.W

2016-08-04 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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QUESTION: Do memories hinder or help people in their effort to learn from the past and succeed in the present? I think that memories from the past will help people reflect their way of life and this will make it possible to develop themselves, leading success in life. Every person has both good and bad memories in ther life and they both are important in that they give some useful advice. Good memories are very important becuase they can make individual characteristics in positive way and this builds desirable social relationship among people. Likewise, bad memories are also important becuase people can get the lesson from them. For example, if a person has an experience that he have been in trouble by getting lost in another country, he will realize that must prepare map for traveler not to be get lost next time. Therefore, we must not ignore bad memories, but we should try to learn from both good and bad memories of the past.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Sara! ^^ How\'s your day so far? I would like to thank you for writing in our composition board today. I enjoyed reading your opinions. Like what you have mentioned from your essay, memories, whether they are good or bad could help us reflect and become a better person. Some people are able to use their painful memories as inspiration in order to succeed. The more that they think of the bad memories, the more that they are determined to achieve their goals. On the other hand, there are also some people who find inspiration on good memories. Nevertheless, I think it would be best to use these memories to your advantage. If they make you feel uneasy or bad, then it\'s best to burry them deep from your consciousness. If they inspire you, it would be better if you constantly remind yourself of them. Anyhow, that is my opinion regarding this matter. See you again tomorrow. :) ~Teacher Charry I think that memories from the past will help people reflect their way of life and this will make it possible to develop themselves, leading success in life. >> I think that memories from the past will help people reflect their way of life and this will make it possible to develop themselves, leading a successful life. OR >> I think that memories from the past will help people reflect their way of life and this will make it possible to develop themselves, becoming a success in life.Every person has both good and bad memories in ther life and they both are important in that they give some useful advice. >> Every person has both good and bad memories in his/her life and they both are important because they give some useful advice. Good memories are very important becuase they can make individual characteristics in positive way and this builds desirable social relationship among people. >> Good memories are very important because they can make individual characteristics positive and these build a desirable social relationship among people. Likewise, bad memories are also important because people can get the lesson from them. >> CORRECT! OR >> Likewise, bad memories are also equally important because people can acquire lessons from them. For example, if a person has an experience that he have been in trouble by getting lost in another country, he will realize that must prepare map for traveler not to be get lost next time. >> For example, if a person has an experience of getting into trouble by getting lost in another country, he will realize that he must prepare a traveler\'s map in order not to get lost next time. Therefore, we must not ignore bad memories, but we should try to learn from both good and bad memories of the past. >> CORRECT! OR >> Therefore, we should not ignore bad memories, but rather try to learn from both good and bad memories of the past.

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