20160801_JINNO [이름]

2016-08-02 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

학생이 쓴 원문

Conciliate : I conciliated by baby with toys. Feel awkward : What if I feel awkward? At the same time : She was laughing and crying at the same time. Red type : Due to the terrorist outrage occured last month, red-type has been tightened in all airports. Exhilarating : It was an exhilarating first day of the August. Noticeable : Since I took the class in Power English, I had have a noticeable improvement in speaking. Due to the fact that : What is happening now is due to the fact that~ Don’t go by the book : I will try not to just go by the book when it comes to speaking in English. Incorporate : The travel packages imcorporates every meal. Cost of living : The high cost of living in seoul has caused people to move into the suburbs. Medical Treatment : Korea is very advanced in medical treatment (technology), so that many patients from other countries visit in Korea every year. Place the blame : What’s the point of trying to palce the blame at this point?

강사 첨삭

Hi Jinno! ^^ Good evening! Thank you for taking time in sending in a homework despite of your busy schedule. This is a very good way to improve more on vocabulary and idiom usage. Try to also use them in your everyday English conversation.^^ Good job! ^^ Keep it up!   Teacher Glenda^^   Here are my corrections:   Conciliate : I conciliated by baby with toys. >> I conciliated my baby with toys. or >> I conciliated my baby by giving him/her toys. Feel awkward : What if I feel awkward? >> Correct At the same time : She was laughing and crying at the same time. >> Correct Red type : Due to the terrorist outrage occured last month, red-type has been tightened in all airports. >> Due to the terrorist outrage that occured last month, the airport has been on red tape. Exhilarating : It was an exhilarating first day of the August. >> CorrectNoticeable : Since I took the class in Power English, I had have a noticeable improvement in speaking. >> Since I took the class in Power English, I have had a noticeable improvement in speaking.   Due to the fact that : What is happening now is due to the fact that~ >> CorrectDon’t go by the book : I will try not to just go by the book when it comes to speaking in English. >> CorrectIncorporate : The travel packages imcorporates every meal. >> Correct>> The travel packages incorporates every meal. Cost of living : The high cost of living in seoul has caused people to move into the suburbs. >> Correct>> The high cost of living in Seoul has caused people to move into the suburbs. Medical Treatment : Korea is very advanced in medical treatment (technology), so that many patients from other countries visit in Korea every year. >> Korea is very advanced in medical treatment (technology), that is why many people from other countries visit Korea every year. Place the blame : What’s the point of trying to palce the blame at this point? >> What’s the point of trying to place the blame on anyone at this point?

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