20160801_JINNO [이름]
학생이 쓴 원문
Conciliate : I conciliated by baby with toys.
Feel awkward : What if I feel awkward?
At the same time : She was laughing and crying at the same time.
Red type : Due to the terrorist outrage occured last month, red-type has been tightened in all airports.
Exhilarating : It was an exhilarating first day of the August.
Noticeable : Since I took the class in Power English, I had have a noticeable improvement in speaking.
Due to the fact that : What is happening now is due to the fact that~
Don’t go by the book : I will try not to just go by the book when it comes to speaking in English.
Incorporate : The travel packages imcorporates every meal.
Cost of living : The high cost of living in seoul has caused people to move into the suburbs.
Medical Treatment : Korea is very advanced in medical treatment (technology), so that many patients from other countries visit in Korea every year.
Place the blame : What’s the point of trying to palce the blame at this point?
강사 첨삭
Hi Jinno! ^^
Good evening!
Thank you for taking time in sending in a homework despite of your busy schedule.
This is a very good way to improve more on vocabulary and idiom usage.
Try to also use them in your everyday English conversation.^^
Good job! ^^
Keep it up!
Teacher Glenda^^
Here are my corrections:
Conciliate : I conciliated by baby with toys.
>> I conciliated my baby with toys.
or
>> I conciliated my baby by giving him/her toys.
Feel awkward : What if I feel awkward?
>> Correct
At the same time : She was laughing and crying at the same time.
>> Correct
Red type : Due to the terrorist outrage occured last month, red-type has been tightened in all airports.
>> Due to the terrorist outrage that occured last month, the airport has been on red tape.
Exhilarating : It was an exhilarating first day of the August.
>> CorrectNoticeable : Since I took the class in Power English, I had have a noticeable improvement in speaking.
>> Since I took the class in Power English, I have had a noticeable improvement in speaking.
Due to the fact that : What is happening now is due to the fact that~
>> CorrectDon’t go by the book : I will try not to just go by the book when it comes to speaking in English.
>> CorrectIncorporate : The travel packages imcorporates every meal.
>> Correct>> The travel packages incorporates every meal.
Cost of living : The high cost of living in seoul has caused people to move into the suburbs.
>> Correct>> The high cost of living in Seoul has caused people to move into the suburbs.
Medical Treatment : Korea is very advanced in medical treatment (technology), so that many patients from other countries visit in Korea every year.
>> Korea is very advanced in medical treatment (technology), that is why many people from other countries visit Korea every year.
Place the blame : What’s the point of trying to palce the blame at this point?
>> What’s the point of trying to place the blame on anyone at this point?
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