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At the beginning of the twentieth century, East Los Angeles became a popular immigrant destination. In an early 1900s, Russians, Jews, Japanese, and Mexicans all had a significant presence in the area.
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At the beginning of the twentieth century, East Los Angeles became a popular immigrant destination.
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In an early 1900s,
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Russians, Jews, Japanese, and Mexicans all had a significant presence in the area.
>> Correct!
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