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2016-12-26 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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Essay Question: What is the most memorable experience you've had in our class I think.. I very glad to know Philippines culture and new friend. Evey single class, I spoken english with my power english teacher, I have incrasing interest about english.

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==Teacher Charlie==


I think..
I very glad to know Philippines culture and new friend.
Evey single class, I spoken english with my power english teacher, I have incrasing interest about english.

>> I think the most memorable experience I\'ve had in our class is that I have had the pleasure of knowing about Philippine culture and befriending you. In every class, my interest in English has increased the more I spoke in English with my teacher.

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