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Today is the start of 2016 Korean Baseball practice game.
>>CORRECT
OR:
>>The practice game of Korean Baseball 2016 started today.
I waited wacthing baseball game for 3months.
>>I have been waiting for three months to watch a baseball game.
And finally I can watch a baseball because it is a baseball season.
>>Finally it\'s baseball season already so I can now watch a baseball game.
Today my team KIA and the other team LG didn\'t have a match because of rain.
>>This day me and my team KIA didn\'t able to have a match with the team LG because of the rain.
So,I had been hated raining when the match continuing.
>>That\'s the reason why I hate rain when the game is ongoing.
Today,Samsung won the game and NC lose the game.
>>CORRECT
BETTER:
>>Team Samsung won the game against team NC today.
Lee young ook hited 3run homerun and Park Seok Min,Lee Ho Jun hited solo homerun.
>>Lee Young Ook and Park Seok Min hit three homerun and Lee Ho Jun hit a solo homerun.
And Sk batter Gomez hited 3runhomerun but Sk didn\'t win.
>>The batter of SK hit three homerun but still SK didn\'t win.
Hwanwa won the Nexen.
>>CORRECT
OR:
>>At the end of the game team Hwanwa won the match against team Nexen.
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