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2017-01-06 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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I have a friend who had everything from my point. I met with him at a university. Reason why I think he has everything are he can speak English and Chinese very fluently, his salary is very high, and he is tall and handsome. Also, he has his own apartment in my age. I have never seen the person like him around me.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! ^^

Thank you for telling about this person who you think has \"everything\".

All good things,

==Teacher Charlie==

I have a friend who had everything from my point. I met with him at a university.

>> I have a friend, whom I met in university, that has \"everything\" in my point of view.

Reason why I think he has everything are he can speak English and Chinese very fluently, his salary is very high, and he is tall and handsome.

>> He has \"everything\" because he can speak English and Chinese fluently, his salary is exorbitant and to top it off, he is also tall and handsome.

Also, he has his own apartment in my age. I have never seen the person like him around me.

>> Additionally, he already owns his own apartment and we\'re both the same age! I have never met anyone like him.

>> OR: He was able to buy his own apartment when he was around my age.) I have never met anyone like him.

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