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2017-01-12 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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If I would be able to have a opportunity to study a subject I have never had, I would choice a "Food and Nutrition", because I want to be good at cooking and don't know details of nutrision. Also, I want to make the best dishes as possible I can for my family, friends, and myself some day in the future. Finally, wherever I go for a work, I can cook what I want to eat regardless of the local food culture.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! ^^

Thank you for answering the composition topic. ^^

All good things,

==Teacher Charlie==

If I would be able to have a opportunity to study a subject I have never had, I would choice a \"Food and Nutrition\", because I want to be good at cooking and don\'t know details of nutrision. Also, I want to make the best dishes as possible I can for my family, friends, and myself some day in the future. Finally, wherever I go for a work, I can cook what I want to eat regardless of the local food culture.

>> If I could study any subject that I have never had the opportunity to study before, I would choose culinary arts and nutrition because I want to be good at cooking as well as know the chemistry behind nutrition. I also want to make the best dishes as I possibly can for my friends, family and myself in the future. Lastly, whichever place I go to for work, I want to cook what I want to eat regardless of the local food.

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