2017/01/20 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! ^^
Good job in expressing your thoughts about last Friday\'s composition topic. ^^
All good things,
==Teacher Charlie==
I believe it would be better for children to learn foreign language as soon as they start school because to let them get used to a foreign lanuguage(especailly, English). we live in global world and globalzation is getting fater than the past. Even if they can not be good at using foreing lanugage, basic knowledge of a foreign language is important for their future which is to get a advantage in getting a job, imformation ans so on.
>> I believe it would be better for children to learn foreign languages, especially English, as soon as they start school because they will then get used to it. We live in a global world and globalization is spreading faster than it was in the past. Even if children fall short in becoming fluent in a foreign language, they would at least have basic knowledge of that language which would advantageous for them in the future like getting a job, procuring information and so on.
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