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2017-02-09 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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I prefer to live in apartment because it will be more comfortable than live with roommate. If I live with the roommate, I have to be aware of that my personal actions make the roommate be uncomfortable. Actually, I had an experience in living in a dormitory when I was 21.It was a kind of fun experience. However, Now, I have become to like being alone more. Even if I have to pay more to rent the apartment, I would rent for my personal time.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! ^^


Thank you for expressing your preferences about different housing options. ^^


All good things,

==Teacher Charlie==



I prefer to live in apartment because it will be more comfortable than live with roommate. If I live with the roommate, I have to be aware of that my personal actions make the roommate be uncomfortable. Actually, I had an experience in living in a dormitory when I was 21.It was a kind of fun experience. However, Now, I have become to like being alone more. Even if I have to pay more to rent the apartment, I would rent for my personal time.

>> Between university dormitories and apartments in the community, I would choose to live in the latter because it would be more comfortable than living with room mates. I say that it is more comfortable since I don\'t always have to be aware of my actions if I lived in an apartment alone.

I actually experienced living in a dormitory when I was 21 years old. Living with room mates was fun however I have come to prefer living alone nowadays since even if I have to pay more to rent out an apartment, my personal time is priceless.

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