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2017-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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I prefer take 50/50. In some situation i don't have a experience, I can take advices from family and friends, because it allows me to think more flexibly. Even if I don’t take their advices, I can prepare something to make a better result. However, I believe that listening to others advices too much cannot make me decide what I really want. So, I prefer to take advices from family and friends maintaining my supervision.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! ^^


Thank you for telling me your stand about the composition topic.


All good things,

==Teacher Charlie==


I prefer take 50/50. In some situation i don\'t have a experience, I can take advices from family and friends, because it allows me to think more flexibly. Even if I don’t take their advices, I can prepare something to make a better result. However, I believe that listening to others advices too much cannot make me decide what I really want. So, I prefer to take advices from family and friends maintaining my supervision.

>> I stand in between taking advice and having personal experience when talking about the best way of learning about life. If I am faced with a situation I don\'t have any experience in, I would ask for advice from my family and friends since it allows me to be able to ponder on the situation with more clarity. Besides, even if I don\'t take their advice, I would be better informed to get an acceptable result.

On the other hand, I believe that relying too much on others pieces of advice would muddle my own decision hence making my wants obscure.

That is why I prefer seeking for advice from my family and friends while maintaining my independence.

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