2017/02/24 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
A manic Monday ^^
Thank you so much for sharing your own thoughts.
Some people say \"First impression last\", but for me I would agree with you. It would be a bit unfair to simply judge a person
without giving him or her to really show who she/he is. We are responsible of our own judgments. biases and prejudices but it
would be best for us to know a person first then judge after.
I\'ll see you in class ^^
Here are my corrections:
I would like to say this is 50/50.
>> Correct
or
>> This is just my opinion.
Actually, we cannot judge a person’s character with a first impression because there is no information but only have a first impression information to judge the person’s character.
>> Actually, we cannot judge a person\'s character based on our first impression because there are no information about the person yet but only our impression.
It is why I said 50/50.
>> Correct
If one person give a bad impression to another one at the first meeting, another one wouldn\'t like to talk with the person who gave the bad impression even the one gave a bad impression has a good will.
>> If one person gives a bad impression to another at the first meeting, the other person wouldn\'t like to talk to that person who gave the bad impression even the one gave a bad impression has a good will.
or
>> If one person gives a bad impression to another at the first meeting, the other person wouldn\'t like to talk to that person who gave the bad impression even if that person has a good intention.
Also, it takes time to change the first bad impression to good impression because as I mentioned, we don’t have much information of the people.
>> Correct
or
>> It also takes time to change the first bad impression into good because as I mentioned, we don’t have much information of the people.
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