2017/03/24 Homework

Hi [이름]! ^^

You never fail to amaze me.  I really admire how dedicated you are when it comes to learning.

It also challenges me to do new things for myself. I hope that your attitude towards learning

will never change. ^^

See you in class^^

Teacher Glenda

Here are my corrections:

I prefer to try new things based on what I do well already.

>> Correct

or

>> I prefer to try new things based on what I can already do well.  

For example, if I have a good command of English, I will try new things such as challenge to high level of difficult English test and getting a new job with using English.

>> If I have a good command of English, I will try new things such as challenging myself to a higher level of difficulty of  English test and getting a new job using English.

It makes me satisfied with myself more and gives a chance to try and get new things.

>> Correct

or

>> It makes me satisfied with myself more and it gives me a chance to try and acquire new things. 

I like to develop myself and achieve what I plan then I can have more confidence with myself.

>> I like to develop myself and achieve what I plannes then I can have more confidence with myself.