2017/04/05 Homework

2017-04-08 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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I didn’t have any of experience of taking cooking class yet. Actually, I would like to learn how to cook well in that class especially, I would like to learn how to cook Japanese Cuisine. Japanese cuisine is very expensive far more than Korean Cuisine and most of all I really like Japanese food. So, I want to make Japanese cuisine by myself to save money and eat a lot of my favorite Japanese cuisine. After learning and being able to make some Japanese cuisine, I will learn Korean Cuisine.

강사 첨삭

 

Hi [이름]! ^^

Happy weekend! ^^

 

You are a very determined and persistent person so I guess there will be no

problem learning new things such as cooking. As long as you set your mind to

whatever you want to do, you can do it. Thank you for sharing this.

 

I\'ll see you in class. ^^

 

Teacher Glenda

 

Here are my corrections:

I didn’t have any of experience of taking cooking class yet.

>> I didn\'t have any experience in taking cooking classes yet.

Actually, I would like to learn how to cook well in that class especially, I would like to learn how to cook Japanese Cuisine.

>> Actually, I would like to learn how to cook especially, Japanese Cuisine.

Japanese cuisine is very expensive far more than Korean Cuisine and most of all I really like Japanese food.

>> Japanese cuisine is far more expensive than Korean cuisine and one more thing, I really like Japanese food.

So, I want to make Japanese cuisine by myself to save money and eat a lot of my favorite Japanese cuisine.

>> So, I want to cook Japanese food myself to save money at the same time I can eat a lot.

After learning and being able to make some Japanese cuisine, I will learn Korean Cuisine.

>> After learning how to cook and prepare Japanese food, I will learn how to cook Korean food.

 

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