2017/04/10 Homework

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Here are my corrections:

I would give up the TV.

>> Correct

Actually, a cellphone which means a smart phone has all the functions the others have.

>> Correct

or

>> Actually, a cellphone or smart phone has all the functions that the other gadgets have.

Also, I can get by without TV because I can get much information on the news and whatever I want to watch.

>> Correct

or

>> Also, I can get by without TV because I can get much information on the news or whatever I want to watch on smart phone.

However, the reason why I wouldn\'t give up the computer is that I want to play online games.

>> Correct

It isn\'t substituted by smartphones.

>> It can\'t be substituted by smart phones.