2017/04/12 Homework
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강사 첨삭
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I would eat bibimbob because there are many ingredients which are rice, meat, vegetable, egg and so on in bibimbob.
>> I would eat bibimbob because there are many ingredients which are rice, meat, vegetable, egg and so on.
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>> I will eat bibimbop because it has many ingredients such as rice, meat, vegetables, egg and you can add more.
So, I can maintain good balance of nourishment and also make many kind of bibimbob by using different ingredients.
>> So I can maintain a good balance of nourishment in my body, also I can make many kind of bibimbop with different ingredients.
It would help me to not be gotten sick and tired of only one food.
>> It would help me not to get sick and tired of eating only one food.
Nice and variety of taste and good nourishment is the reason why I choose the bibimbob.
>> Variation of taste and good nourishment are the reasons why I chose bibimbop to eat in my entire life.
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