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2017-04-17 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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I would eat bibimbob because there are many ingredients which are rice, meat, vegetable, egg and so on in bibimbob. So, I can maintain good balance of nourishment and also make many kind of bibimbob by using different ingredients. It would help me to not be gotten sick and tired of only one food. Nice and variety of taste and good nourishment is the reason why I choose the bibimbob.

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I would eat bibimbob because there are many ingredients which are rice, meat, vegetable, egg and so on in bibimbob.

>> I would eat bibimbob because there are many ingredients which are rice, meat, vegetable, egg and so on.

or

>> I will eat bibimbop because it has many ingredients such as rice, meat, vegetables, egg and you can add more.

So, I can maintain good balance of nourishment and also make many kind of bibimbob by using different ingredients.

>> So I can maintain a good balance of nourishment in my body, also I can make many kind of bibimbop with different ingredients. 

It would help me to not be gotten sick and tired of only one food.

>> It would help me not to get sick and tired of eating only one food.

Nice and variety of taste and good nourishment is the reason why I choose the bibimbob.

>> Variation of taste and good nourishment are the reasons why I chose bibimbop to eat in my entire life.

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