2017/04/17 Homework

Hello [이름]! ^^

Thank you for sharing your thoughts about this topic.

Undeniably, the technology plays a very big part of our life and it makes it easier.

It helps gain more friends and meet new people from all around the globe.

But let\'s be careful, because sometimes we get closer to a lot of people on the internet

but we forget those people who are around us. ;)

See you in class^^

Teacher Glenda

Here are my corrections:

I think technology which changed the way we interact with people is good because we can know each other more.

>> Correct

For example, some people who cannot expression their thinking well and have a reserved personality can talk and express better what they think through messengers.

>> For example, people who have reserved personality and cannot express their ideas/opinions can talk and can better express it through messenger.

Also, we can have more chance to meet with new people and make new friends more easily by social network service.

>> Also, we have more chances to meet new people and make new friends easily through social networking sites. 

However, those I mentioned could make some people who like being alone get tired of interact with the people continuously.

>> However, the above mentioned could also make other people who like to be alone get tired of continuously interacting with people.