2017/04/19 Homework

Hello [이름]! ^^

TGIF! :)

Thank you for this piece. I have seen her on TV and she really is very famous

and beautiful. :) We sometimes get inspiration from people we see on TV either

in entertainment industry, music or sports. It is a good thing that despite

of their titles, they became an inspiration to people.

See you in class^^

Teacher Glenda

Here are my corrections:

If I could meet someone who is too famous to meet with in personal, it would be Kim Yeon A who is the most famous figure skater in the world.

>> If I would meet someone in person who is very famous, It would be Kim Yeon A. She is a very famous figure skater in the world.

I want to ask her how she control herself.

>> Correct

I think that being the best in the world is the hardest thing of what I can think.

>> I think, being the best in the world is the hardest thing that I can think of.

I believe she absolutely did more than her best by controlling herself and having the motivation to achieve something she wants.

>> Correct

or

>>> I believe that she absolutely did more than her best by controlling herself and having a motivation to achieve her dreams/goals.

I’m sure that I can learn many things from her.

>> Correct